Task one:bar chart
Task two:
Some people believe when famous people support international aid, it makes the general public think about it. Others think celebrities make the problem less important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
此题可以采用折中的写法
支持明星慈善
名人生活在聚光灯下(live under the spot light)并且他们拥有大批的粉丝(massive followers)名人参与慈善(the involvement of social celebrity)可以让潜在信息(intended message)更快地传播出去(is swiftly and instantly spread across the world)并且会得到大众的关注(draw the public‘s attention on donation)相比较而言,明星慈善(celebrity charity)会比普通人做慈善效果更加显著(work more effectively than that have done by ordinary people). 此外,由于一些明星的人设(figure setting/character setting),比如博爱的人设(philanthropism)会更容易改变大家的观点(be more persuasive)因此,明星的参与(the devotion of social celebrity to charity organization)不仅可以让信息更快地传播(broadcast the message widely)并且可以影响大众的情感和认知(shape the public sentiment and public opinion)
然而,有些人不支持明星慈善的主要原因是很多人根本不了解慈善的真正目的(the ultimate purpose of charity)他们只是将目光放置在明星本身(their focus is placed more on stars themselves)所以从这个角度来说,很多人并不知道慈善的后续进程(the following procedures)以及捐款是否到达需要者的手里(reach to the needy people)。此外,很多名人(famous people )支持慈善的(support charity)主要是处于自身的考虑(for the sake of their own personal gains)这就会到这这些人只希望得到大众的注意(receive public attention on them)因此,背离了慈善的最初目的(undermine the original charitable intention)
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